Iasked him

Started by biolaephesus, March 21, 2018, 01:06:20 PM

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what he wanted
for breakfast
he replied
toasted kisses and splash
of dimpled smiles,
checked the larder
found a smile
and a prayer.

Mark Hoffmann

Yes. Very Yamrus.

Just one question. Do you say "splash" as opposed to "a splash" deliberately because that is how he speaks?

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Yamrus because the title serves as the first line?

Very nice Biola. A heartening moment.


 ;D ;D Yamrus eh?He mentored me and I graduated the day he said I could now call myself an aspiring poet. Thanks a lot.I am preening because of you guys now :-* :-*