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Poet's Corner / Snippets Needs Help Tonight
« on: December 18, 2019, 11:28:28 AM »
…Snippets:
Brilliance slips away
on particulate matter.
You’re not the banker
so let the cards scatter.
The painterallows expects
colors to bleed.
Rare, carbon-trace-papers
seldom at need.
Yet you cling today
on a slippery ladder.
You’re beaten, and blanker,
and profoundly sadder
Acknowledge decay
and reality clatter
The consequence anchor
and plain, simple chatter
Help!
Any and all thoughts are helpful. The last two lines are particularly dreadful and my editing capabilities here have taken a whacky turn.
Thanks.
as your thoughts tatter…
while your conscience does smatter
as your conscience does scatter…. [/i]
The last two lines wandered off with the wine.
Brilliance slips away
on particulate matter.
You’re not the banker
so let the cards scatter.
The painter
colors to bleed.
Rare, carbon-trace-papers
seldom at need.
Yet you cling today
on a slippery ladder.
You’re beaten, and blanker,
and profoundly sadder
Acknowledge decay
and reality clatter
The consequence anchor
and plain, simple chatter
Help!
Any and all thoughts are helpful. The last two lines are particularly dreadful and my editing capabilities here have taken a whacky turn.
Thanks.

while your conscience does smatter
as your conscience does scatter…. [/i]
The last two lines wandered off with the wine.