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LenaBrennan

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Christmas Shopping
« on: January 28, 2018, 03:09:04 PM »
Christmas Shopping

Frozen feet in black school shoes
Slap through slush and run to keep up,
Slip through crowds, past lighted shops, and market stalls.
Tear stains on an unloved face
A seven-year-old, longing to go home.

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Re: Christmas Shopping
« Reply #1 on: February 03, 2018, 10:30:28 PM »
Paints a stark picture, Lena.