Author Topic: Sloppy Craftsmanship: a writer training game  (Read 482 times)

thatollie

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Sloppy Craftsmanship: a writer training game
« on: December 29, 2021, 03:53:54 PM »
So, I had an idea for a game where one person would post an example of something they consider sloppy work and then everyone else would dogpile in looking for the detail that was so egregious. Then, there would be some consensus on who would be responsible for the next example... ad infinitum.*

So, this cartoon is terrible overall but I'm only going to subject you to 13 seconds of it. What do you guys think bothered me so much about this scene that I created a game around it?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBmW_Y7yvag


*I am fully aware that set a game, pick a winner and then they set the next game is a terrible way to run a game especially on a forum. If you're interested in why that is, let me know because I am more than capable of writing a short article on that topic alone.
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