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DGSquared

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Obit **Caution**Language
« on: September 01, 2021, 08:29:00 AM »
       Obit


The old man will die soon,
he is no longer fighting.
He doesn't give a shit.

When the mean, old bastard
finally dies, there
will be no obit.

~Deb

Second draft:


Relative

The asshole will die soon,
he is no longer fighting.
He does not give a shit.

When the mean, old bastard
finally dies there
will be no obit.

~Deb

Edit:

Something to be said for not posting your writing after two cocktails, especially if you are emotional.  ::) :o ::)

It's not that we aren't willing to write an obituary for him, he simply doesn't want an one..
« Last Edit: September 03, 2021, 06:55:47 AM by DGSquared »
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read." -Groucho Marx

A child’s life is like a piece of paper on which every passerby leaves a mark. -Chinese proverb

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