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Re: Anapaestic interchanges of the trimetric kind (strictly adults only)
« Reply #1635 on: September 08, 2021, 02:52:12 AM »
I just had a lucky escape,
when attacked by a quite rabid grape
grower called Max
who liked to smoke grass
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Re: Anapaestic interchanges of the trimetric kind (strictly adults only)
« Reply #1636 on: September 08, 2021, 12:40:05 PM »
I just had a lucky escape,
when attacked by a quite rabid grape
grower called Max
who liked to smoke grass
while wearing a hamster-skin cape.

While painting his submarine green
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Re: Anapaestic interchanges of the trimetric kind (strictly adults only)
« Reply #1637 on: September 08, 2021, 05:44:13 PM »
While painting his submarine green
with thick coat of aqua-marine

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Re: Anapaestic interchanges of the trimetric kind (strictly adults only)
« Reply #1638 on: September 09, 2021, 03:43:00 PM »
While painting his submarine green
with thick coat of aqua-marine
he started to wonder
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Re: Anapaestic interchanges of the trimetric kind (strictly adults only)
« Reply #1639 on: September 09, 2021, 04:37:16 PM »
While painting his submarine green
with thick coat of aqua-marine
he started to wonder
if green was a blunder
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Re: Anapaestic interchanges of the trimetric kind (strictly adults only)
« Reply #1640 on: September 11, 2021, 03:06:59 PM »
While painting his submarine green
with thick coat of aqua-marine
he started to wonder
if green was a blunder
so he switched to a bright tangerine.
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