Started by rewh2oman, May 04, 2020, 10:52:15 PM
Quote from: Jo Bannister on May 05, 2020, 09:39:52 AMI wish would-be writers would stop listening to an algorithm and learn their trade from good books instead. Grammarly's suggestion is awful. Your first attempt was better; though the whole sentence could be improved. Lose the BOOM for starters, unless you're writing for the under-10s. Then ask yourself if a row of initials is the best way of describing a car. And if an explosion in a fuel tank actually rings.